Step 1
1.
What
is Isen Mulang Cultural
Festival ?
2. When Isen Mulang Cultural
Festival held
?
3.
How
is Isen Mulang Cultural
Festival ?
Step 2
Topic sentence :
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Isen Mulang Cultural Festival is
an event held to recognize the cultural and ethnic diversity in Central
Kalimantan.
Supporting Sentence:
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Isen
Mulang Cultural Festival held on
May to celebrate the birthday of Central Kalimantan .
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In
Isen Mulang Cultural Festival there
are various events.
Concluding Sentence:
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In
conclusion, Isen Mulang Cultural Festival is a unique annual agenda to showcase diversity in Central Kalimantan.
Step 3
Isen Mulang Cultural Festival
Isen Mulang Cultural Festival is an event held to recognize the cultural and
ethnic diversity in Central Kalimantan. Isen
Mulang means “Never give up” or “Never
retreat” in the Dayak Ngaju language. It is the motto of the
province of Central Kalimantan, which was formed on May 23th 1957. It is become part of people's lives in Central Kalimantan from
the past until now. Isen Mulang Cultural Festival is regularly held on May to celebrate the birthday of Central
Kalimantan and that included in the annual agenda of the Tourism
Office. Palangkaraya ever become the overall champion in the cultural
festival events. In Isen
Mulang Cultural Festival there are a variety of events. Starting from a lively opening in big
square, downtown Palangkaraya. At the opening there
was a parade followed by thousands of people from a variety of districts
in Central Kalimantan. There is also a contest of traditional food, dance
competitions, traditional games and also a selection of sons / daughters
tourism. This festival not only showcases Dayak culture, but also cultural
tribes of migrants from Central Java, East Java and Bali. They participated in
a parade and show cultural diversity. In conclusion, Isen Mulang Cultural Festival is annual
agenda that unique to showcase the diversity in Central Kalimantan.
Isen Mulang Cultural Festival: “ Festival Budaya Isen Mulang (FBIM)” in Indonesian language
Diversity : Variaty
Never retreat : Never moving backward Tourism Office : “Duta Pariwisata” in Indonesian language
Parade : Walk
somewhere in a formal group of people, to celebrate or protest about
Annual agenda : An
event that held in each the year
Showcase : To
performance
It is paragraph good, you can describe it be interesting. But please give more specific sentence that can to tell "Why is it can be popular ?" .:)
BalasHapusI think before explaining about the cultural festival would be better you explain what it is about Isen Mulang first, the next steps like about the culture that you just said. goal that the reader can understand what Mulang Isen.in this case you may not appropriate to use the phrase in which first described.
BalasHapusi think your paragraph has good. you can explain based on your brainstorming maybe i think just it.
BalasHapus