Sabtu, 26 Desember 2015

Definition Paragraph EFL Writing II Class



Step 1

1.      What is Juhu Umbut Sawit ?
2.      How familiar of  Juhu Umbut Sawit for people in Palangka Raya ?
3.      When is Juhu Umbut Sawit served ?

Step 2
Topic Sentence :
Juhu Umbut Sawit is a typical food in Palangka Raya, Central Kalimantan.
Supporting Sentence :
                    1.      Juhu Umbut Sawit is very foreign to some people in Palangka Raya.
                    2.      Juhu Umbut Sawit served for Dayak Traditional Ceremony.
Concluding Sentence :
Juhu Umbut Sawit are typical and favorite foods from Palangka Raya.

Step 3
Juhu Umbut Sawit
            Juhu Umbut Sawit is a typical food from Palangka Raya, Central Kalimantan. This food is made from palm trees are young. Juhu Umbut Sawit has a savoury taste and slightly sweet. Usually, this food served with grilled catfish so it makes Juhu Umbut Sawit has own flavor.  Juhu Umbut Sawit is very foreign to some people in Palangka Raya, because of his name unpopular. However, the touris who often visit to Palangka Raya usually search this foods. Juhu Umbut Sawit served for Dayak Traditional Ceremony. For Dayak people, Juhu Umbut Sawit is a favorite food that must be served on each held events such as, Wedding Ceremony, The traditional ceremony to receive guests, etc. In conclusion, Juhu Umbut Sawit are typical and favorite foods  from Palangka Raya.

Juhu                  : Vegetable                
Umbut              : Palm trees are still young
Sawit                : Palm tree
Savory              : Having a taste that is salty not sweet
Slightly             : A little
Grilled catfish  : The fish that live in fresh water, or “Ikan Patin” in Indonesian language
Foreign             : Of,  in or from a country that is not your own







3 komentar:

  1. I think this paragraph is good if in the paragraph was not given as an example the repetition of the phrase " Juhu Umbut Sawit has a savoury taste and slightly sweet. Usually, this food served with grilled catfish so it makes Juhu Umbut Sawit has own flavor." I think looking for another sentence in order not to repeat the sentence.

    BalasHapus
  2. may be you mean tourist not touris. and i think your paragraph have good.

    BalasHapus
  3. Please give the composition what the contain of this food .. I think it is will make your paragraph be better . :)

    BalasHapus