Palangka Raya City
One of the places to visit in Central Kalimantan is Palangka Raya. Palangka Raya is a beautiful city. It has many trees and big building in roadsides. There are five the best qualities hotels such as Swiss Bel Hotel, Aquarium Boutique Hotel, Neo Palma Hotel, Amaris Hotel, and Avicena Hotel. Palangka Raya has two iconic buildings. There are The Big Square and Soekarno Monument. The Big Square in down town Palangka Raya consist of a meeting of eight roads that symbolized the eight great island of Indonesia. The city has famous local dishes that delicious and healthy such as yellow rice, soto banjar, amplang (fish crackers), patin bakar (grilled river catfish), etc. Palangka Raya has many interesting places. They are Park of city, Balanga Museum, Kahayan's river, Kalawa's water park, etc. In conclusion, Palangka Raya has many interesting places to visit where a lot of features cultures in it.
In my opinion, you have to classify areas into one that does not seem disheveled and repetitive.
BalasHapusOne of the places to visit in Central Kalimantan is Palangka Raya. Palangka Raya is a beautiful city. It has many trees and big building in roadsides. Palangka Raya has many interesting places. They are Park of city, Balanga Museum, Kahayan's river, Kalawa's water park, etc. There are five the best qualities hotels in Palangka Raya, such as Swiss Bel Hotel, Aquarium Boutique Hotel, Neo Palma Hotel, Amaris Hotel, and Avicena Hotel. Palangka Raya also has two iconic buildings. There are The Big Square and Soekarno Monument. The Big Square in down town Palangka Raya, consist of a meeting of eight roads that symbolized the eight great island of Indonesia. Palangka Raya has famous local dishes that delicious and healthy, such as yellow rice, soto banjar, amplang (fish crackers), patin bakar (grilled river catfish), etc. In conclusion, Palangka Raya has many interesting places to visit where a lot of features cultures in there.
I think, the paragraph is good. But, you should to more compiled the sentences again. first, you must classify the item who explanation. Second, do not repentitive the same word. Finally, you must to try write more again.
BalasHapusI thought it's a good paragraph. I suggest you to make your concluding sentence better. it's must brings the paragraph to a logical conclusion and don't forget the concluding sentence states the main point. And i agree with Nurul you have to classify the item/place that you want to explanation before and don't use the same word, you can use pronoun to help you.
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